This was a fun read! I have no idea how much similarities there are with Stargate Atlantis and I don't read fanfic, so for me this was new and I loved it. The prologue was rather technical, so I took a break, but finally I came back and then the story was just unputdownable. Jasper's revenge campaigns were just too funny and his on the one hand rather brutal honesty, on the other hand awkwardness with all around him was appealing to read as well. And then to follow Jasper and Brian slowly, but surely opening up to each other, tentatively and then closing up again when in doubt of the reaction, that was very endearing. I wouldn't mind to read more about Jasper and Brian.