At first I really had problems to get into the story as Danny's voice got majorly on my nerves, this oh-I-am-so-funny-and-witty was rather too much for me. Add to that the repetitive thoughts and actions and it was a tad difficult for me to read on. However at some point it changed - either I got used to Danny or his voice was just toned down, but suddenly I was drawn into the story and then I just had to read on. Overall a very good read, I felt for Danny and for Lance and the HEA was totally fitting and deserved. Small niggle at the end: What was Lance doing with his life besides staying in NY with Danny?