This would have been a 5 star rating, as I really like the writing and the whole set-up of the story. BUT - from some point on when Denny showed the pics to Brad(? I'm so bad with names and especially if there are several similar ones in the story) it got a bit over-the-top. All this situations the twins found themselves in, yes it's a bit too much. It still was a very good read, but what got me to be rather annoyed was another open end/cliffhanger. I still don't know how the relationship between Denny and Brian proceeds and I also don't know whether Brian will be able to start his MIT studies. I somewhat think, that of course everything will be settled as expected, but at the end of this story it's not. Sorry but this is a rather cheap means of stringing the reader along. I'm not sure whether I'll read the next installment.